Sat 16 Sep 2006
I received it by email—
amazing how they proliferate
in the fading days of summer
as shadows climb the stairs
at sunset, creeping past the open door
where regret waits to welcome night
Just when I thought the rhythm and words
were right, I learn something is missing
in my metaphor and meter
I’m reminded that age can dull
the edge of inspiration
and leave me alone
with the night
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October 24th, 2006 at 6:38 am
This one is sweet and poignant. I’m sure many people can relate to this. But for the record, Tomas, I’m sure that your metaphor and meter is just fine. It’s just others who are tone deaf and uninspired!
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